Girls do they like you? Yes "."
love your stream of consciousness honesty in these haikus
Check all of the comments yo did on other blogs on what I said
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the first one is good just that hot,dry freedom is 4 syllables not 5
2nd one is good just 6 syllables
last one is ok
I like how you incorporated a lists in your haikus
Girls do they like you? Yes "."
ReplyDeletelove your stream of consciousness honesty in these haikus
ReplyDeleteCheck all of the comments yo did on other blogs on what I said
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ReplyDeletethe first one is good just that hot,dry freedom is 4 syllables not 5
ReplyDelete2nd one is good just 6 syllables
ReplyDeletelast one is ok
ReplyDeleteI like how you incorporated a lists in your haikus
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